Thursday, 24 November 2011

THE FIRST KISS!


It was a cool night that day. Amidst summer, you barely get those nights though but I was witnessing one. I was waiting to board my bus from Jaipur back to Delhi after leaving mom there. I got the ticket and as every normal guy I wished that a beautiful girl sits right besides me. For the backup, I bought a Durjoy Datta novel. I boarded n luckily I got a girl right besides me. She wasn’t as beautiful but a bit cute. Huge eyes hid behind those big spectacles of hers. I was determined to fancy my chances. I thought being ugly you shouldn’t miss much!
The bus journey began and I started searching for a reason to talk to her but sadly was finding none. She was talking to someone on phone and sobbing heavily. I pitied her. Listening to her talk while staring at my novel I got to knew that it was her boyfriend and she was near a breakup. Lucky bastard, that guy was coz when I saw her face quite close to my eyes, she was incredibly CUTE!! She wore a nice tight fitting top with a skirt and a scarf. Nice curly hear which barely reached her shoulder and some old fashioned spectacles. It seemed as if she was a normal middle class girl with extraordinary beauty.
A li’l time passed and I still got no success. After about half an hour she spoke and asked, “hey! What are you reading?” I replied trying not to smile, “a silly sexaholic novel.” She gave me a weird look and turned her face. I knew I was bad at it. Still I tried and we exchanged names. Her name was NANDINI and I wondered that this name is blessed to be cute. After the usual formal conversation, I asked, “are you okay? I am sorry I heard your conversation with your guy” she resisted a bit but gave in coz she needed someone to share and I was the lucky one!
She was a bit formal in the beginning but she soon got normal and shared her part. She told that she’d been with him since 2 years and they were very much in love but since last two months he was behaving in a strange way. She had inquired from her sources and got to knew that he was double dating her. He later confirmed it and it did hurt her bad. She cried a bit while narrating this and pitied her. At the end, I asked her, “You want a hug?” as soon as I finished the sentence, she hugged. She needed it and I was more than glad to help her.
We talked a lot more. She was quite comfortable now and I was relishing the conversation as well. She wished to sleep a bit and I readily agreed. Literally we slept together. *wink*
I looked at her while she was asleep. She had rested her head on my shoulders and trust me the feeling was great. She looked even more beautiful without those specs. I preferred admiring her to my sleep.
 We reached a hotel at the mid-way and I fed her. She joked about my male ego but who cared. I would never get a chance to treat a pretty one as her. We began the journey again with full bellies and another sleep. It had been an hour that I was admiring her again. I felt an affinity towards her name. Suddenly she opened her eyes and caught me staring at her. I don’t know what made her chuckle and give a peck on my cheek but I felt good. She was listening songs on her i-pod looking outside and I was helplessly relishing her beauty. Suddenly while staring away I got a glimpse of her cleavage. I dint want her to think wrong of me and I looked away. Sadly, she had caught me. She naughtily held my hand, took it in her soft hands, stared right into my eyes and uttered and said, “it’s okay”. We were too close to each other. Everyone except a foreign couple was asleep inside the bus. We were quite close to each other. I was breathing heavily and so was she. I don’t know who initiated but our lips met. We kissed. I could feel the taste of the slice she just finished up and was enjoying it.
I still remember, her lips were so luscious and soft! The way her tongue entangled with mine in a moving bus with no lights and a bit cold. The way her heavy breath fell on mine and I curled up her hair back behind her ears. It was awesome. My hands were rushing behind her back feeling every inch of it and she was crushing my lips into her and pulling my hair. It felt awesome. I never wanted it to end but she broke it. It felt awesome and she came to me as beautiful as ever. We both sliently sat for an hour more and slept. I woke up with the conductor screaming that we had reached delhi. I hated him. I looked besides me and she was already gone. She got off at gurgaon without even leaving her number or anything to contact. I felt a bit sad and then I felt it was a perfect ending. I had kissed a beautiful girl and it felt awesome. :D

46 comments:

  1. Simply awesome, it is..<3 :)

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  2. it is
    F u c k i n n
    a w e s o m e! :D

    no more i can say!
    you are the best .
    the words make me fall in love,
    ( i dunno wid whom :p )

    but, watevr . .ss th best iv read from a frnd .
    keep writing . you're so perfect to be an author !.
    il co-author wid you ;)

    you rock ! ♥

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  3. Thanks a lot vaishnavi! <3
    It means a lot! :D

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  4. well i described most of it on phone... and i reinstate my statement "faaduu bhaaaiii" !!
    awaiting your next write up!

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  5. it was awsum.....
    jst luvd it....
    keep writing..:):)

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  6. Thanks a lot Monika! I'll try to write more stuff. :D

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  7. hey...liked it... short simple n sweet..!!! :) :)

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  8. im lucky to view this blog of urs

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  9. both your work is superbly awesome :) :)
    i wish to read one of your writings daily..!! makes my day :) :)
    continue making us all fall for the work <3

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  10. you write crispy... focus more over the language... that was an interesting read... keep up!!!

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  11. Thanks a lot! :)
    I will try to improve!

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  12. amazing it is :D
    everytym i read it .... it makes me fall for ur writing more ;)
    just a piece of advice .... the more simple u keep ur work the more connected a person feels
    so as alwayz keep it simple :D

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  13. m new to ur blog.....so hi first of ol....
    n for vat u hv written, Awesum is d first word dat comes to my mind.....
    makes me fall in love evrytym i read it....
    w8ng for more of ds kinda stuff....
    tc n keep writing....
    Neha...

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  14. Hey Neha! Thanks a lot! :)
    I'll surely keep you hooked the next time as well. :)

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  15. abby.... nice story... b t i kinda thnk d strtng had a slow nd fictional startng... bt slowly nd steadily u gaind pace n d story.... bt d endning amzng.... jus fabulous.... lovd it... wait for yur next wrk... bt sumthng real... r evn if its ficvtional make me believe its real... let out yur imagination.... let its fly like a free bird... hahaha... keep up d gud job! :)

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    1. haha, i will. n yeah, i don't guarantee it's fiction. ;)
      Thank You! :)

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  16. sorrry jaldi jaldi mein likha tha.. toh kaafi spelling mistakes hai... dnt mind tht... u knw wat i mean 2 say...

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  17. dude!! u r just awesome..finally read ur blog (as my bro is not at home..c.. i was not makin ny excuses) ...i just love it...mahn..its hard to express wat i feel now...keep writing..long way to go! *applause* :) :)

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  18. its vry nyc..
    i too read Durjoy n ur wrtin quite matches wid him.. m sry fr d comparision..
    i might b wrng bt u mst be readin 'Oh Yes! i'm single' in d bus...
    n u write fabulous.. keep it up.! :)

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    1. Thanks a lot Aarohi! :)
      It's a compliment itself to be compared to him! :D
      p.s. - Yess! I could only flip a couple of pages of that book. ;) (I forgot mentioning that it is fiction! :p)

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    2. Nice work..One thing i did not like is that if you say its a compliment to be compared with Durjoy then do not call his book "silly sexaholic novel" and also when you are posting about your blog on his profile..Rest,keep up the good work..

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    3. Thanks Anonymous! :)
      I admire Durjoy for whatever he has done uptill now but then all said above is in a lighter mood. He is still my ideal! :)

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  19. good blog! Liked it!
    Read all of them :)

    Are d incidence true o fictions in ur blog?

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    1. Thank You! :)

      Um, i'll tell you that once you provide individual inputs on all of them! :D ;)

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    2. how about u read my blogs too! N after u comment i will do that
      Heres my blog
      lazybeing.blogspot.com/

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  20. u seem to flater every1 here :) :) wd u as well as ur posts :)

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    1. That's a part of my character i guess! ;)

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  21. 2nd blog done..:D
    appreciated....;)

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  22. It's amazing, I loved it!
    well done! :)

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  23. A beautiful description of a wndrful tym pass travelling.. May b its all true may an imagination nd may b a dream of urs... But its good nd m almost done wid aallll ur blogs as said it last comment.. But cldnt comment on all bcz of my so called mbbs studies.. Bydway carry on writing nd hope u visit my blog!!!

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  24. honestly i have always fantasized this..but unfortunately the guy just got lucky...it's an awesome work..you surely deserve an applause...

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    1. Fantasize, eh? ;)
      When are we travelling together next? :P
      Jk, thanks! :)

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