As it's the Valentine Week and everyone is blogging about love, statuses are flooded about love and blah blah. So, I am not writing about love. It's kinda difficult for me to express love in such a short blog. I thought of writing about something else. I wrote this poem last night. Actually I got the idea from a friend who felt lonely the other evening when it was raining. Whenever it rains we associate it with love, pain or fun. She had an awful break-up just few days back and i could only hear as she said. No matter how much we guys pretend to be cold, we are actually quite weak at that thing beating in the middle of our chests. I have written it from a girl's perspective. Read on. I hope you'll like it. :)
I'll Learn to live with it....Some Day...
As these raindrops fall on my eyes....My tears make way for the drops....
I feel the droplets as I close my eyes....and his face crops ...
I open them suddenly...unable to bear the pain....Unable to bear the hollowness in my heart....
It was just yesterday we were together but now we are apart...
I feel the droplets as I close my eyes....and his face crops ...
I open them suddenly...unable to bear the pain....Unable to bear the hollowness in my heart....
It was just yesterday we were together but now we are apart...
But I guess I’ll learn to live with it....Some Day....
As the water touches my feet, I remember the day when we first met.....
The sea that existed...The rest of the world, which ceased to exist, I fell in love, I bet!
It was just me and you.....
I wish we’d sail through....
The moonlight falling on us...
Lighting up the smile on my face...
And the waves of the sea....
and you said, you admired my grace!
Waves touched our feet and you said you love me....
I hugged you tight and I was filled with glee....
Those moments, Our memories won’t stay away from me, ever…
I didn’t know then, that the pleasure wont stay with me forever....
That I would stand alone in the rain....
Hoping that it would wash away my sorrow....
But I guess I’ll learn to live with it....Some Day....
Maybe it was all my fault...I couldn’t love you enough....
As the water touches my feet, I remember the day when we first met.....
The sea that existed...The rest of the world, which ceased to exist, I fell in love, I bet!
It was just me and you.....
I wish we’d sail through....
The moonlight falling on us...
Lighting up the smile on my face...
And the waves of the sea....
and you said, you admired my grace!
Waves touched our feet and you said you love me....
I hugged you tight and I was filled with glee....
Those moments, Our memories won’t stay away from me, ever…
I didn’t know then, that the pleasure wont stay with me forever....
That I would stand alone in the rain....
Hoping that it would wash away my sorrow....
But I guess I’ll learn to live with it....Some Day....
Maybe it was all my fault...I couldn’t love you enough....
Maybe I went too rough...I am just so impatient and stuff…
But how do I tell you...?
How much I yearn for that feeling....
Me in your arms...
and the world seemed complete...
How do I tell you....?
How lonely I feel tonight....
But how do I tell you...?
How much I yearn for that feeling....
Me in your arms...
and the world seemed complete...
How do I tell you....?
How lonely I feel tonight....
Without you in sight…life is complete shit…
But I guess I’ll learn to live with it....Some Day....
How I miss those rains....
When we walked together....
My head on your shoulders...
All worries kept aside, all pains got over....
How we danced in those rains...Not caring for the rest of the world...Leaving all our sorrows behind...Living for the moment....in your arms I curled..
But I guess I’ll learn to live with it....Some Day....
How I miss those rains....
When we walked together....
My head on your shoulders...
All worries kept aside, all pains got over....
How we danced in those rains...Not caring for the rest of the world...Leaving all our sorrows behind...Living for the moment....in your arms I curled..
And here I stand....
All Alone.....
Waiting for you.....Waiting for a miracle to make things perfect as before…
But I guess I’ll learn to live with it....Some Day....
Amazing as alwayz! :)
ReplyDeleteI'm soo happy i can be th first one to read it and comment here.
when u messaged me last night, trust me.. i have felt the happiest :D .. and when you told you wanted me to be th first one.. i felt damn good :)
this the best line :*
"It was just yesterday we were together but now we are apart..."
<3 and it takes too much fr a guy to write from a girl's perspective. :P
you remember how id asked u to.. earlier? ;) lol.
SOm finally you've done it! :D
Lots of love. Keep it coming :)
I meant *so, finally you'v done it! :P * sorry fr th spelln mistke. :P
ReplyDeleteand you better start working on a novel.. soooon :)
Thanks a lot. I am glad i could make you happy. <3
ReplyDeleteStay blessed, Stay awesome! :)
You have so beautifully described the pain !
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words, awesome writing and too touching..
your words just made me put myself in that girl's position and i could feel the pain and for me,that defines a marvelous work .. :)
aha! thanks a lot. I am so glad you liked it! :)
DeleteWho wouldn't :) :)
Deletewell i could make nothing out of it! but yeah it seemed nice from a girl's perspective ! nice play of words, but yeah the title could have been a bit more deep and better!
ReplyDeletep.s - you suck much less every time i read any of your new blog :P
Whatever!
Deleteyour next write up shouldn't be a sad one! give it a happy ending! be optimistic!
Deleteand then perhaps you'll suck even less! (i hope now someone else would't get offended this time) ;)
Done. I hope to write on a drunken day this time! ;)
Delete(oh, c'mon. she's a nice girl. she got you wrong.)
that wont come for a long - long time!
Deleteyeah i understand, no hard feelings vatsala :)
YES!! I GOT U WRONG!!
Deletechuck it please!!
:o
mr sharma the way u expressed from a girls perspective is amazing :)
ReplyDeleteit really takes a lot for a guy to think n write that deep for the opposite sex ;)
for me yet an other amazing work by an amazing writer :D
p.s. undoubtedly i would love to read a novel from u soon , very soon :D
Um, thanks a lot! :)
DeleteHey Anmol!
ReplyDeleteIn spite of knowing that he sucks at every blog of his, why do you take pains to read it?
Strange man!
It's kinda sweet of you to react that way. (^_^)
DeleteBut he is a close friend and he said that in pure fun. :)
mine(the one you called nice) is nothing in front of it!
ReplyDelete*Embarrassed!
very nicely written!
Aw! Thanks a lot! :)
DeleteHey Vatsala!
ReplyDeleteWell Abhishek is a really close friend of mine, and i can say anything to him and besides that i need not explain anything to you!
Anmol! Easy! I didn't mean to b that harsh!
DeleteSorry :O !
Yeah! Just havin some fun! chiil ;)
Deletechill*
Deletehey its fine!
DeleteI should've been a little less instructive!
;) all peace here!!
Love the expression of the poem soft yet loud.... suttle yet complicated... an absolutely beautiful way to express the most ugly feeling in the world.... in short it is awesome...
ReplyDeleteAh, and that by far is the best compliment i have received for this work. Thanks a lot. please have a look at my other posts too. :)
DeleteFabulous :) i don't have words to express how beautifully its written :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Shiv! :)
Deleteloved it! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you! :)
Delete:') beautiful .. thts ol i cud say.. who ever u are.. ua a brillent writer... u pore feeling in every word ov uaz.. way too amazingg... loved it!!
ReplyDeleteAh, Made my day totally. :D
DeleteAwsome.. M reading each ur blog day by day nd m felling for ur each writinv.. Xactly describing wat a girl feels.. Too good man..
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Archita! :)
DeleteKeep Reading. :D
Lovely :)
ReplyDeleteLovely :)
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